And there she laid with the oxygen mask on
thinking about what happened with her at dark.
Tears rolled down her cheeks without any pause
by just thinking about its cause.
She remembered how she said a NO
and requested them not to do so.
But their fantasies were bigger than her cries and requests.
They proceeded without any disgrace.
All she could do was cry and weep
but there was no one to listen to her on the street.
Their hearts didn’t melt as she cried,
they were crude, wicked and vile.
They found their happiness, she lost her smile
and there they left her dying.
The ghastly truth😥Very well put in words
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those lines espouse very tragic and heartbreaking emotions.
It’s unfortunate that such devils exist in this world.
May Almighty give more power, patience, and strength to that beautiful soul that was mercilessly wretched by such monsters. Ameen
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Brings back memories of the horrific incident in India many years ago. Not a single ounce of remorse from the perpetrators….or their lawyer
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And all they did was blame the girl.
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It’s quite worrisome that there is no decline in this trend despite severe punishment including death sentence.
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Yes, exactly.
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Horrifying . Devils. Should never be forgiven
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Exactly. They shouldn’t be forgiven for such heinous crime.
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It’s painful
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Yes.
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You have written it very beautifully
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Thank you.
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I think women should take a step for another woman rather than waiting for someone to come and do justice or protect, let’s be a shield for womanhood and protect every single woman which truly is woman upliftment
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Yes, I agree with you.
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Beautiful expressed .Painful!
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Heart-wrenching
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So chilling. Thank you for using your platform to spread awareness.
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Pleasure.
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Heart wrenching
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Thank you
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You’re welcome
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Hello dear,
I have nominated you for fun tag
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Nice
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You’re words depicted the pain clearly.
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Certainly one of the worst of crimes. Unfortunately the punishment for rape around the world does not fit the severity of this crime.
Art
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Exactly.
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This is good because it is openly tragic. There is nothing right in what happened, and it is no excuse that “their fantasies were bigger” (though very well described by you). I mean, you know this. But as you describe this rape, we learn and hopefully we empathize how it is with any rape. And hopefully we look for ways, one by one and all together, to get justice and to fix the attitude and agenda.
Thank you!
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heartbreaking 😦 but well described.
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Painful !!! Well written .
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I have no words.
You write all.
Thanks to you, with your words, to try to change the world.
Miss G 🙏
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Thank you.
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These reports are painful each time.
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Yess.
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May God Judge them for who they are .
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God will.
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Amen
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You’re a good writer
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Anytime😊
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Reblogged this on Oblivious of the danger.
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You are welcome.
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You definitely don’t pull your punches, which is good with this subject. We should remember that rape is a trauma and a crime.
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Sadly, very well put. #metoo
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Very well written!!!
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Sadly well put. 😥
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Every line has its own deep meaning…There are many who can write but it’s not easy to write just so small and bring tears in one’s eyes. Your words are so simple yet powerful… Keep it up! ❤
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Thank you so much. ☺
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Uff….your heart wrenching words brought me in comment section but I’m wordless…..
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Thank you.
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It’s my pleasure….
Stay safe, stay tuned..💙
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Reblogged this on The Searchlight and commented:
Rape is a dehumanizing act by predators and causes emotional and psychological trauma in victims. I thought it is an experience that should not be visited on any lady and I make bold to state that rapists are insane and danger to every society.
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My pleasure
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Reblogged this on sketchuniverse and commented:
😤😖😕 SO TRUE, SISTERS. ART ALSO CAN EXPRESS FEELINGS ABOUT ANNOYANCE.
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Hello Shivani, the merit is only yours. Congratulations for your post. You’re so welcome 😘😘
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Thank you for the appreciation ❤☺
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#metoo
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Beautifully penned the horrifying truth of so called Modernization….
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Yes. Thank you.
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Powerful. You have a strong voice and and a sensitive heart. ❤
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Thank you 🌸
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Touching
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You nailed it. Powerful stuff!
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Sadly this is a global issue not endemic to India. Women unite globally to bring justice to perpetrators. Thanks for your part in blogging about it.
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Yeah.
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Very beautifully expressed in words 🥺
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Thank you🌸
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https://amyshedrack200.wordpress.com/2020/07/23/say-no-to-rape
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This one is heart wrenching…. Gave me goosebumps ☹️…. How can someone be so inhumane , not to listen to someone’s constant pleadings and tears?…. Has humanity died?….
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These people don’t have a heart. They don’t have feelings. They aren’t even humans. They’re all monsters.
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They indeed are!…
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It is painful how we live in such a world. Beautifully written. Devils do exist.
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Thank you.
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